Link to Chapter Two. CHAPTER THREE Nelle’s Diner is a neat little affair with a stainless steel exterior and one of the best breakfasts in town. Year-round, Christmas lights adorn the front of the small building. Mark was in a booth up front, spreading homemade strawberry jam onto his whole-wheat toast, his vegetarian egg-white omelet already partly devoured.
Nailed that detective-like voice with extravagant metaphor usage and the double identity of a deathbed pastor adds a fascinating complication . Great read, looking forward to chapter 4.
I don’t know how I will keep sane waiting for chapter 4.
Nailed that detective-like voice with extravagant metaphor usage and the double identity of a deathbed pastor adds a fascinating complication . Great read, looking forward to chapter 4.